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Re: You
Hiya! Temptress here for a quick review! Let's begin, shall we? For your first poem it's very well written. (A lot better than my first one!) Although, I do suggest ...
Oct 26, 2017 -
Re: Lacking In Warmth
Hiya Woahhitherepal! Temptress here to give you a review! Let's begin, shall we? Like the previous user, I also noticed the grammatical issue with the poem. And I do agree ...
Oct 26, 2017 -
Re: If Only
Hiya RainaDee! Temptress here to give you a review! Let's begin shall we? To me the poem seems very repetitive, but maybe that's how you intended it to be? Most ...
Sep 23, 2017 -
Re: Broken
Hi Wild! Temptress here for probably the worst review you've ever gotten. Let begin. The first thing that stood out to me was a few typos and hey that's okay ...
Sep 23, 2017 -
Re: My Home
Hi Summer! Temptress here to give you probably the worst review you've ever gotten but oh well. Let's begin. The first thing that stood out to me was the repetition, ...
Sep 23, 2017
