Telina

*OH! I'd like Victoria to be the one who got shot, somebody can add that in*

*Comes to a halt while passing through some photographs.* Wow, I love these. 1.) This is amazing, beautiful sky, great colors, the silhouette of the trees and other vegetation is ...

Victoria Bobby and I both tilted out head, like a puppy who doesn't understand what it's master is commanding. "You can take this one Bobby." I said, sounding like a ...

McKenzie I chuckled, a happy feeling filling my body as Ballow stood up, turning back to help me up as well. What a gentleman, I thought. Then I panicked, I ...

Victoria "You saw yourself?" I asked. Dinah started to sit up, Bobby kept his hand on her shoulder and I looked nervously to the floor. I wonder if I slapped ...

Victoria "Dinah!" I knelt on the other side of Dinah. "What's wrong?" I whispered in her ear while brushing her hair back. Everybody was standing close to see what was ...

1.) It's good, don't worry about the branches. The angle is nice, and the shadowing under the trees is great! the light on the church is good too. 2.) not ...

Ms/Dr. Evolet Ray I hated this part, when a troop asks if I was taking him or her off duty. It's like being slammed up against a wall and beaten ...

McKenzie I was thrown back, I had expected Ballow to say yes, to say yes and get up and leave, maybe even run. Even if it wasn’t true, any excuse ...

I do think it should be smaller, just so we could see it fully. Other than that I think it's taken from a unique angle, close up and tilted, but ...

Oh I like this, the couple is done really nice. They are simple, not a lot of detail, but the way you positioned them made it romantic. I also like ...

I'm look around a small portion of my domain I look around a small portion of my domain As I look around me own the pebble strewn floor I spot ...

Victoria I spun around on the patrol room chair, barely watching the screens. What was the point of Bobby telling me to stay here? If I saw anything, I couldn’t ...

Ms/Dr Evolet Ray I finished jotting down a few notes before I set my pen aside and looked up to the badly beaten man. "Here's his file, Dr. Evolet," my ...

Victoria I loved watching the sunrise. When I turned 18 I began to bribe my closest friends into taking me on their patrols, anything to help. I’d find myself staring ...