Telina

Just a few more things I noticed =] 'Ryder' - I thought with bolting upright. I thought while bolding upright I realized I had to get out of here before ...

It took us about 30 minutes to reach the mystery destination. It was nice feeling the wind blowing in my hair and the adrenaline pumping through my veins . Forgive ...

Okay so I read this piece and I really think you need to go back and see how you can make this better. You need to work on description and ...

Those nights you wasted lying awake in bed Staring at the window when nothing else was said What happened to all the yesterdays, I wonder Oh I love this part! ...

My eyes nearly fell out of my head. My hand fluttered uselessly over his beautiful body, not sure what to do. As if a switch had been flicked inside my ...

I could feel my knee’s trembling and Ryder’s sure and strong arms picking me up when I was shaking so much I could not see anymore or be able to ...

10/10, although I haven't heard the last two. 1. What If You - Joshua Radin (I swear my media player loves this guy) 2. Learning to Fall - This Beautiful ...

*shifty eyes* I was talking to myself, but What If You - Joshua Radin was playing in the background

The heart sticking out it's tongue is brilliant! I also liked the fire and moon inside the circle, that was really cool. Random seems to work for you=]

Mr. Darcy doesn't watch me sleep. I'll take him. HA-HA, very true. Also Clo, hilarious comments. I love Edward, in his own way and Mr. Darcy in a different way, ...

This is great! You were right to add the color, it makes it look so much better, it gives the wings real definition. There's nothing i can even critic! You ...

You're taking this down a really good path, I like the plot so far, I just wish you would make their relationship a little better, you'll see what I mean ...

The waves crash down on me, burying me in my past. Stay there you child, you do not know enough to talk. I get beat down with their words, their ...

HA-HA I remember the first time I saw it; I was just said to myself “Okay Telina, let’s not try and figure that one out.”

The buildings were in piles of rubble on the ground, the soil was dug up so it faced the sun, and people, dead people, lined the sidewalks. This sentence had ...