TeenQueen

Oops. I meant PRESENT tense, not past!

Thank you so much for your commets! :) Well, actually I meant to write it in the past tense. Since it's based on my actual reflections, I didn't want to ...

Thank you! It always brings a smile to my face when someone enjoys my writings, so thanks for making me smile! :) I will certainly try and continue with the ...

Thank you!

Awe thanks! I wasn't completely sure about it first but yay me! :p

thank you so much. I am glad you liked it.

Oh, thank you! Appreciate it!

Thanks a lot! I wasn't sure about this piece in the beginning, to be honest, but the encouragement on YWS sure helped. I've actually continued the story so I would ...

Oh, thank you so much! I did post the next installment to this. I shifted to the third person POV though. Hope you check it out :)

Awe! That honestly means SO much. Thank you :)

Thanks! :)

Thank you so much! :)

Um...the letter makes it sound like she's stared at him before...wouldn't she know what colors his eyes are by now (rather than fantasizing about what they might be)? Or do ...

Oh my gosh!!! I love this...I am not going to review it but all I can tell you is that it's amazing! Especially for a first poem. I can so ...