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Re: Answer This Question in as Few Words as Possible...
Because that's the only time I am really myself.
Apr 12, 2013 -
Re: The Graveyard.
(Sorry I can't make the changes bold. Something seems to be wrong with the editor.) Twilight: 30 Harry Potter: 60 Miley Cyrus: 46 Hunger Games: 62 Vampire Diaries: 46 YWS: ...
Apr 9, 2013 -
Re: Don't Ask.~ 2
Two words - love it! “You don’t get it!” Delilah bawled, “It’s how I feel! I can’t help it! How can you blame me for having emotions?! Don’t you realize ...
Dec 31, 2010 -
Re: Don't Ask.
I quite enjoyed reading this piece. I like your style of writing, and yes, the stroy looks like it's going to lead somewhere interesting. (Fingers crossed) I am not really ...
Dec 31, 2010 -
Re: You died, tonight.
Ha ha ha!!! I've been on YWS after a year now, and that was the first piece I read since I am back. I am glad this was the one ...
Dec 31, 2010 -
Re: Where?
You promised the world at my feet, You promised you’ll always “be there”, & you said that you will always stay, Hold my hand as the weathers change. But when ...
Jul 7, 2010 -
Re: Why???
People all around me, Are moving at a fast pace, I am glued in the centre Struggling to cover the space. What is this feeling, Where endless sleep is all ...
Aug 31, 2009 -
Re: A letter I'll never post...
Um...the letter makes it sound like she's stared at him before...wouldn't she know what colors his eyes are by now (rather than fantasizing about what they might be)? Or do ...
Aug 30, 2009 -
Re: A letter I'll never post...
Do you know what my favorite memory of you is? Not that time when we sat together…or when we laughed, and shared secrets…not the time we became friends. It is ...
Aug 29, 2009 -
Re: Those Little Glass Slippers (1)
Wow! This was beautiful. Seriously. Never have I ever loved a piece of work as much as I loved this. Honestly, I am at a loss of words. This was ...
Jun 6, 2009 -
Re: Snacks n Sips
Okay, this is one of the worst stories I've written, So I could do with a bit of help. And I am warning you, it's somewhat pathetic. 4th February, 2008 ...
Jun 5, 2009 -
Re: Just friends
I told you that it couldn’t be. You weren’t meant for me. I said you were my best friend. But you couldn’t be more than that. I said I wanna ...
Jun 2, 2009 -
Re: Just friends
Removed.
Jun 2, 2009 -
Re: Never.
Oh my gosh!!! I love this...I am not going to review it but all I can tell you is that it's amazing! Especially for a first poem. I can so ...
Jun 2, 2009 -
Re: Life Without You
Hello again! I really like the way that you don't limit your lines to rhymes. I think those kind of lyrics make up great songs. According t me, this song ...
May 28, 2009
