TedusCloud

It's still unfinished but posted it here to see if I'm getting the mood and imagery I want across and to see whether it's worth continuing :)

Just posted Chapter 2 :) Please take a look :)

Thanks for your reviews as always :) I was trying to establish the book's timeline - with the BP spoof and all, in order to make a point. I bordered ...

Thanks for your wonderful review! I'm very glad you enjoyed this, you have no idea how much this made my day! I have been working on this story for a ...

Thanks for your critique :) I was beginning to think nobody cared xD I was trying to reference and satirise the BP oilspill incident with the Banks thing - hence ...

This is my first story that I've managed to finish I'm afraid :) I've a few more which are unfinished, which I want to try and finish soon though xD

The beginning confused me, but got me hooked. What does "castrating their felonies to make sure they're contained" and "releasing their enemies to keep them at bay" mean? Thanks a ...

I thank you all for your great critiques :) Also I would like to tell you the novel in its current entirety (yet unfinished) is in the Advanced Critiques forum ...

Thanks for your wonderful critique. I have taken all of it to heart and want to adjust accordingly :D I did notice my sentence structure is a bit off here ...