TeddytheBear

I appreciate all critiques. Thanks! P.S. I am rather new to writing, so I apologize if I switched tenses, or some other amateurish mistake :smt086 ________ Entering the room, a ...

Thanks everyone, this information has already proved extremely helpful. :)

I am asking this question because I am attempting to write a second book after my recent failure. To elaborate, when I was ten, I began writing. Naturally, I had ...

Ranger Hawk : Thank you for the warm greeting and I will definitely post the chapter when I have edited it. ______ Vanadis : Once again, thank you for welcoming ...

you better watch out.” I apologize if I am incorrect, but I remember my English teacher telling us that it should be, "You had better," and that saying, "You better," ...

Abba questioned, brown eyes searching, ”If you knew something was wrong, Alexandra, would you, to the best of your capabilities, oppose and try to right it?” Surprised, Alexandra glanced up ...

Thank you for reviewing, emoticon220, and I appreciate your comments very much. __________ Elinor Brynn, I am planning (tentatively) on writing a second stanza explaining why life is a pun, ...

Hello, my name is Teddy the Bear, and as I am new to this site, this is my first post. Alright, I apologize for the lame title, but I was ...

Queen Grace walked up and fo r ward Foward, should be forward, and in this case, walking up and forward share the same meaning, so eliminate up or forward, depending ...

The queen, named Harmonia, did not fear him, but she should have…. I think if you eliminated the word named, the sentence would have a better flow, though it is ...