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  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Teen Fiction Re: On with the story (The Ringly's ch. 2 pt.1/2)

    I'm glad you like it so far!

    Apr 25, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: I am not a monster (pt. 2/2)

    Thanks! (I'm not the best with spelling and grammar, so thanks for pointing those things out for me).

    Apr 25, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Teen Fiction Re: I am not a monster (pt. 1/2)

    Thanks! Yeah, the tense thing would probably be because I started writing this as a first-person story, which works best, at least for me, in the present tense, but I ...

    Apr 25, 2019
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Other Re: Beautiful Things

    Thanks!

    Apr 19, 2019
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: At The End

    I've never heard Ryan used as a feminine name before, weird. Maybe I spend a little too much time looking into symbolic names and thematically appropriate names rather than just...names. ...

    Apr 16, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: I am not a monster (pt. 2/2)

    Thanks for the review!

    Apr 15, 2019
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Other Re: Beautiful Things

    Thanks! I'll keep this in mind in future works.

    Apr 7, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Teen Fiction Re: TheFactsOfLife (The Ringly's ch.3)

    Thanks! I'll refer back to this when I edit this chapter and I'll keep you posted about updates.

    Apr 3, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: On with the story (The Ringly's ch. 2 pt.2/2)

    Thanks!

    Apr 1, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: On with the story (The Ringly's ch. 2 pt.2/2)

    Thanks for the review. I know that you want to know how the hack went, but believe me, there's a reason it's not included. Just wait, dear friend, just wait.

    Apr 1, 2019
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Culture Re: I am cold. My life is dull. My room is dark.

    Thanks for the review, I'll keep all of this in mind for future works.

    Apr 1, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Teen Fiction Re: On with the story (The Ringly's ch. 2 pt.1/2)

    Thanks for the review, I wasn't really sure about that one line either so I'll go back an try to re-work it.

    Apr 1, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Teen Fiction Re: I am not a monster (pt. 1/2)

    Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. The "I am not a monster" parts were actually italicized in the original version, I don't' know why it didn't carry over. I'll have ...

    Apr 1, 2019
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Another life

    Thanks! (Djin is another name for a gene, like, three wishes and whatnot)

    Apr 1, 2019
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: The simple man

    Thanks!

    Mar 31, 2019


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