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I'll think about that for another one of my projects then :)

You're welcome :)

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Yeah, that clears it up. It really wasn't that big a deal in the first place, though we'll have to agree to disagree with the word flow thing and the ...

Wow, did this get out of the greenroom quick! I guess the shorter it is the easier it is to review, but still, wow.

If you didn't I'd be disappointed in your movie tastes.

Thanks for the help! I'm gonna be honest here, I'm not entirely positive what actually HAPPENS in this chapter, but that's just because I wrote it so long ago. I'm ...

Hey! Thanks for the review! It's pretty obvious that you are right about the dreams being important, but at this point, it would be impossible for anyone to guess why ...

I am, in fact, north enough, and yes, there is snow. Unfortunately, I have different feelings about it. You see, I wake up at 4:30 every morning so my mum ...

Thanks for the help! I thought there was something like that contradictory thing. It happens to me a lot, you should see this short story I wrote a while ago, ...

Good luck! I actually have a trick to deal with stress if you're interested. (I'm going to tell you anyway). So there's this effect I learned about that basically triggers ...

I LOVE the new version! You did a wonderful job revising the different sentence structures to flow a whole lot better, and most of the diologue reads much better for ...

You're very welcome. I'm definitely going to be just as harsh on any other chapters you post, just so you know.

I'll check that out now! The way I see it, if you like this, then you and I share similar interests as far as stories go, so it would be ...

Glad you liked it.