Teddybear

You're very welcome.

Thanks for the feedback! I'll be sure to take your advice into consideration when I edit this (right now actually) so yeah, thanks. (I probably won't write anything else in ...

Thanks! (and believe me, I do not want to be clearing anything up with the vibes you're getting from Em and Kiv) (if you keep reading you'll get it, your ...

Thanks for the review! I really do appreciate your being honest and putting more focus on the weaker point of my writing rather than downplaying the actual review in favor ...

Thanks for the feedback! as soon as I get to the editing phase I'll work on the tone thing. I've never really been good at that so thanks for pointing ...

Okay, I finished the paper (it took three hours) and I'll see if I've got the time to go back and read. I'll bookmark it.

Thanks for the review! I think this is actually one of the first reviews to bring up points that I actually hadn't thought of. I am going to try (and ...

Yeah, just about everyone tells me to tell more about the attackers at the beginning, so I'll work on that when I do the next edit.

Well, I've gotta write some short stories for school anyway, so I'll get on that. I actually started two other stories in this collection so I'll see if I can ...

So, the sentence structure thing I'm going to blame on this being pretty old (about a year and a half-two years) and, admittedly, really poorly edited. That's on me, and ...

Thanks! Yeah, I only did a really quick edit before posting this, and that was, admittedly, mostly spell check. Thanks for the feedback, as I will most certainly be using ...

Thanks! I made this a few months ago, or maybe a few years ago, I honestly have no idea, but it was before I figured out how to trim out ...

I'm gonna move this to a private message, m'kay

let's not talk about mine, you get anything cool?

Hey, thanks for the review! I'm glad to hear that you were able to connect with this anxiety-fueled-meltdown that somehow became a poem, despite its message not applying to you ...