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  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Mystery / Suspense Re: Colors (Chapter 1)

    Sorry, replied to the wrong one, my sister is fiddling with our new ukulele and it's very distracting.

    Mar 6, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Mystery / Suspense Re: Colors (Chapter 1)

    You're welcome.

    Mar 6, 2019
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Other Re: Artificial Life 1 (I meet Anna)

    Thanks for the feedback! I've been trying to find a way to include more physical details and I've come to the conclusion that it's not nearly as complicated as I ...

    Mar 5, 2019
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Other Re: Artificial Life 1 (I meet Anna)

    Artificial Life 1 is what AL1 stands for, sorry that wasn't clear.

    Mar 5, 2019
  • Short Story » Romantic, Culture Re: I love you. I like you.

    Thanks for the tips! I used a line from Deadpool 2 as a prompt so... yeah that was kinda weird but I'm glad you liked it.

    Mar 4, 2019
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Other Re: Artificial Life 1 (I meet Anna)

    I'll do that then.

    Mar 3, 2019
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Other Re: Artificial Life 1 (I meet Anna)

    I'm actually planning on writing up a follow up to this, is that something you would want to read? If you want I could let you know when I post ...

    Mar 3, 2019
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Other Re: Aboard the Quinn's Shadow (1111 words)

    Thanks!

    Mar 1, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: Wolf Eyes chapter 9 *rewrite*

    Thanks for the review, I'll keep it in mind when it comes to the complete overhaul editing phase of this project.

    Feb 28, 2019
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Culture Re: The nature of us

    Thanks for the tips! they'll come in really handy when I get to editing this.

    Feb 24, 2019
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Culture Re: The nature of us

    Thanks for the tips! The original is actually in separate stanzas, just when I copy/pasted this from my google docs to here the spaces were deleted as well. I'll get ...

    Feb 23, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: The Prophecy Revealed Chapter 1

    It was fun, but if you try the dress thing, just know that you will need WAY more newspaper than you think you need, hoard the stuff, copious amounts of ...

    Feb 23, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: The Prophecy Revealed Chapter 1

    You're welcome. Whether or not I continue reading is really dependant on how much spare time I've got. In other, unrelated news, I just made a big, frilly dress out ...

    Feb 22, 2019
  • Short Story » Horror, Fantasy Re: Why it's called the Crimson Current

    Thanks for the review! It was super helpful, actually, because this is a writing prompt that my advisor has us do for credit. I already turned this one in, but ...

    Feb 22, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: Wolf Eyes chapter 9 *rewrite*

    Thanks. I've heard about a lot of these issues before and I'm trying to fix them to the best of my ability. Honestly, I'm thinking of scraping this version and ...

    Feb 22, 2019


"I love you as certain dark things are to be loved, in secret, between the shadow and the soul."
— Pablo Neruda