Teddybear

I will start by saying, the problem is not your story, but then again, the problem is hardly ever the story. Your character is stiff, unrelatable. He sounds too stiff, ...

Okay, first things first, I loved it. You do a really good job of weaving the words together so the reader can feel the emotions in the story almost as ...

So, I have a few problems. One, no, I do not have a problem with the boyxboy thing, so don't get me wrong, I'm bi myself so there is no ...

Okay, it's not bad. First things first, I have a small problem with your style. Now, I keep telling myself I won't criticize a writers' writing style, but it seems ...

So, I realize that I may not be the best person to criticise your work, as I myself am only a beginner in the writing field, but I have been ...