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Hey I made it shorter. :) Tell me what you think. Lol

~Chapter 3~ The next morning I woke to a very vivid light gleaming onto my face. At first I thought it was my aunt, thought she had seriously lost her ...

~Chapter 4~ A man was walking towards me. He had a very wide smile that exposed a row of gleaming white teeth, long dark hair swept back into a ponytail, ...

~Chapter 2~ The sun was blazing down on me was like a physical pressure weighing me down. My forehead was plastered with sweat and I could feel my shirt sticking ...

~Chapter 1~ “Why don’t you want to talk about it, dear?” I scowled at the ruby red curtains bordering the window. Outside the sky was a soulless murky gray. The ...

Very good overall poem, i thought it was very powerful and outspoken, and very expressive. readers would enjoy reading your kind of eccentric poems. just some minor things: They had ...

It's very good, i enjoyed it. very powerful. :)

I really liked it, thought it was very expressive and very interesting. you should write more :)

~Chapter 1~ “Like this ?” I asked in exasperation, pointing the arrow at the bright red target and tugging back on it a little bit, eager to release it. “R-r-raise ...

“I’m gonna kill him,” Dennis muttered, wrapping his arms around his soaked self. “Why us?” Galen sighed in exasperation at the mention of this question for the hundredth time. “Shut ...