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Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: untitled- this piece needs critique! very badly!
It wasn't horrable just hard to understand. It was difficult to understand what your story was about. I really had no clue into what is going on. Other than that ...
Jan 11, 2010

Life, although it may only be an accumulation of anguish, is dear to me, and I will defend it.
— Mary Shelley, Frankenstein