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Author's note: Hallelujah! I'm finally un-stuck! *dances wildly* Okay, so this bit isn't the greatest. But after a long period of "Ohemgee what do I do with all of this ...

Haha. Attaraya's a badass. xD Ooh, I'm early this time. *dances* -Saint Razorblade The Official YWS Pirate :pirate3:

wow... that was pretty good... i know its a personal question but dose any of this come from personal experience? Hehe, thank you. ^^ None of it comes directly from ...

Not totally sure about this, but I checked the dictionary and I don't think "inscrupulous" is a word. Typo, perhaps? Gah! Good catch. It's unscrupulous. xD ok, first, why was ...

Dryly is basically synonymous with sarcastically, Choco. ;) And in answer to your question about part 2, all will be answered in the next chapter. ^^

*waggles finger* Double poster! :P I think I caught everything you added, and I really can't find much that bugs me about it. A beautiful Nativity set was carefully set ...

Year 2 >>

Okay, I know it's really soon and I've only gotten one critique for the last bit, but I'm just so eager to end Year 1 and get Year 2 underway! ...

We're almost to the end of year 1! This next bit might be a bit too long, let me know if it is. Too lazy to read over it myself ...

Okay, so normally I'd wait another couple of days to post more, but I'm kind of excited that I've got so many new readers! :D Anyway, this is probably one ...

I'm going through the entire first year right now because I'm noticing some plot holes. So this is highly subject to change once I get everything else done, because once ...

Probably one of my least favourite bits, but my favourite one follows almost immediately. Anyway, if this is too much at once, let me know. Also, to my American readers: ...

Thank you, dear. ^_^ Onto the critique! Hmm... I'm not entirely partial to your introduction. It starts out as a good intro, but it kind of fizzles out in the ...

PLEASE READ: This piece here is actually a short bit I added between where Eric's friends are introduced and where his family is introduced. I'll indicate it on the original ...

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