Teague

Bukowski is great. He speaks the truth and people don't like that too much! I haven't read his other works, so I can't judge him entirely, but... In this case, ...

Role-plays really don't have a copyright, do they? I think you'd be okay. And, you sounds as if you rewrote nearly every aspect of the story on your own, making ...

Um, yeah, just about every morning. xD "Zomg, you're an idiot for doing this! *continued mental self-punishment*" I just kind of wait it out. I know it's just a phase, ...

Er, I wouldn't recommend acting like your character for just a week... A lot of writers do pretend to be their characters, usually when they're writing. A lot of writers ...

**Moved** to Writers Corner. Only actual parts of stories go in Fiction forums. -:pirate3:

Um... this really doesn't belong in Fanfiction. There's no story. *moves to Writer's Corner* -:pirate3:

Snake! Smoke, slither, star, spotlight, spot, scorpion, summer, sound, snot... -:pirate3:

Fail. In all epic splendor. XD -:pirate3:

**MOVED to Writer's Corner** -:pirate3:

Past = time. Passed = past tense of "pass" That should help. :D -:pirate3:

Holy cow. Run-on sentence much? O_O Anyway. It's your call. It depends on the audience you're trying to reach. Are you writing for a younger audience, then put "he swore." ...

**MOVED to Writer's Corner** -:pirate3:

I do, but more often than not I take it away by the end. Usually I just use it for inspiration. And more often than not it's a song lyric ...

Okay, so yeah. AI is officially on the backburner. I may pick it up again in the future, not entirely sure. TYTED has a new title! Whisky on a Sunday, ...

*blinks* I get a proper critique? I'm so honoured! *sobs and huggles Cal* -:pirate3: