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Re: Avies for Till: "Death Machine"
Lol. Hell's probably in the tropis. My favourite, easily. These are fun! I like them. ^_^ Well done. -St. Razorblade The Official YWS Pirate :pirate3: P.S. Completely random ramble ahoy, ...
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Re: Ink on Paper
Treeeeee. *hugs* Yes, I'm a tree-hugger. Anyway, it's an awesome tree. I kind of like the half & half theme. And the number 13 in the branches. No real complaints ...
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Re: What Is Your Favorite Non-YWS Literary Site?
NaNo's the only one I know, plus it's a huuuuuuugely helpful crash course in novel writing. :D
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Re: Little Boy's Laugh
Ahoy there! Welcome to YWS. My name is Razorblade. :D Before I can critique this properly, there's a few things I need to bring to your attention. First, please space ...
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Re: Wall Painting
Wowza! Teh accuracy! You guys must have worked hard on this. Looks incredibly complicated. That's very, very impressive, Via. Well done. My only complaint is the fact that it's not ...
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Re: Sumsky Hussar_ Summer Parade Dress
I like the detail! I think that overall, it's a good drawing. Although he looks a little bit stiff and his moustache seems a bit misplaced. Those are my only ...
Dec 7, 2007 -
Re: The Elements
Ahoy there! Don't think I've met you before. My name is Razorblade, and I shall be your critic for today. ;) Ooh, I like your intro. Although, I think you ...
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Re: Café Foolsdrop
Hello there! As for positives, you have some good imagery and some textured characters. They're beginning to feel pretty realistic. One major problem I've noticed is your tendency to have ...
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Re: Exhilirating Monotony
Flash fiction FTW! Contest page available here: --- It was a battle from the start. Tanya crouched, deep within her cover. She muttered angrily to herself, busying her next volley ...
Dec 7, 2007 -
Re: The Vet
Ahoy there! I see you're fairly new to YWS. Welcome! I'm Razorblade. Anyway... Nel hit the dog, and screeched on the brakes; the rear of her car fishtailing, leaving scorch ...
Dec 7, 2007 -
Re: Title Feedback
Teenagers who set out to change the world somehow. And their catchphrase is "Epic!" I might flip through it. Ahoy Insanity
Dec 7, 2007 -
Re: I have some questions
Everything here is protected, or so I seem to recall Nate saying. There's no need to worry. Also, I don't think many professionals come here, and if they do they ...
Dec 7, 2007 -
Re: The Golden Compass
Protests for a movie. Sweet. Why isn't Harry Potter protested? Afterall, witchcraft is a satanist act!!! Haha. No really, I hate protests because like 80% of the protesters have never ...
Dec 5, 2007 -
Re: Finis
Two words: plot holes. >.< Gaah. I may have won NaNo, but I'm only about halfway done with my novel. And I reread the first part and found a dozen ...
Dec 4, 2007 -
Re: Giant Microbes!
Haha. We were having huge fun with these in Newspaper, and a friend and I were still discussing them as we went to lunch. People were stopping all around us ...
Dec 4, 2007
