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  • Art & Photography Re: Avies for Till: "Death Machine"

    Lol. Hell's probably in the tropis. My favourite, easily. These are fun! I like them. ^_^ Well done. -St. Razorblade The Official YWS Pirate :pirate3: P.S. Completely random ramble ahoy, ...

    Dec 7, 2007
  • Art & Photography Re: Ink on Paper

    Treeeeee. *hugs* Yes, I'm a tree-hugger. Anyway, it's an awesome tree. I kind of like the half & half theme. And the number 13 in the branches. No real complaints ...

    Dec 7, 2007
  • Official Polls Re: What Is Your Favorite Non-YWS Literary Site?

    NaNo's the only one I know, plus it's a huuuuuuugely helpful crash course in novel writing. :D

    Dec 7, 2007
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Little Boy's Laugh

    Ahoy there! Welcome to YWS. My name is Razorblade. :D Before I can critique this properly, there's a few things I need to bring to your attention. First, please space ...

    Dec 7, 2007
  • Art & Photography Re: Wall Painting

    Wowza! Teh accuracy! You guys must have worked hard on this. Looks incredibly complicated. That's very, very impressive, Via. Well done. My only complaint is the fact that it's not ...

    Dec 7, 2007
  • Art & Photography Re: Sumsky Hussar_ Summer Parade Dress

    I like the detail! I think that overall, it's a good drawing. Although he looks a little bit stiff and his moustache seems a bit misplaced. Those are my only ...

    Dec 7, 2007
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: The Elements

    Ahoy there! Don't think I've met you before. My name is Razorblade, and I shall be your critic for today. ;) Ooh, I like your intro. Although, I think you ...

    Dec 7, 2007
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: CafĂ© Foolsdrop

    Hello there! As for positives, you have some good imagery and some textured characters. They're beginning to feel pretty realistic. One major problem I've noticed is your tendency to have ...

    Dec 7, 2007
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Exhilirating Monotony

    Flash fiction FTW! Contest page available here: --- It was a battle from the start. Tanya crouched, deep within her cover. She muttered angrily to herself, busying her next volley ...

    Dec 7, 2007
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Vet

    Ahoy there! I see you're fairly new to YWS. Welcome! I'm Razorblade. Anyway... Nel hit the dog, and screeched on the brakes; the rear of her car fishtailing, leaving scorch ...

    Dec 7, 2007
  • Writing Activities Re: Title Feedback

    Teenagers who set out to change the world somehow. And their catchphrase is "Epic!" I might flip through it. Ahoy Insanity

    Dec 7, 2007
  • Welcome Mat Re: I have some questions

    Everything here is protected, or so I seem to recall Nate saying. There's no need to worry. Also, I don't think many professionals come here, and if they do they ...

    Dec 7, 2007
  • Lounge, The Re: The Golden Compass

    Protests for a movie. Sweet. Why isn't Harry Potter protested? Afterall, witchcraft is a satanist act!!! Haha. No really, I hate protests because like 80% of the protesters have never ...

    Dec 5, 2007
  • NovMo Archives Re: Finis

    Two words: plot holes. >.< Gaah. I may have won NaNo, but I'm only about halfway done with my novel. And I reread the first part and found a dozen ...

    Dec 4, 2007
  • Lounge, The Re: Giant Microbes!

    Haha. We were having huge fun with these in Newspaper, and a friend and I were still discussing them as we went to lunch. People were stopping all around us ...

    Dec 4, 2007


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