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Re: Mutts - Birth
Ahoy! I haven't seen you around YWS before. My name is Saint and I shall be your critic today. :D It never opened its eyes, though it was quick enough ...
Jan 2, 2008 -
Re: I would like to know if my novel is any good.
I have a friend (who is actually a member on this site) who is in a same situation -- she wrote out the whole thing longhand and is now in ...
Jan 2, 2008 -
Re: The Treaty of Ten Systems
15:07 Humans are interesting creatures, Mirexya Allertse thought, watching as a myriad of wine bottles flew towards the sleek new ship. Throwing bottles of refreshments that humans highly enjoy at ...
Jan 2, 2008 -
Re: The Cra-yon Lay-onds 5
Holiday specials now, Aet 2.0? xD Oh, you make me laugh. Genius in the guise of insanity. *applauds* -Saint Razorblade The Official YWS Pirate :pirate3:
Jan 2, 2008 -
Re: Hospital Nativity
*waggles finger* Double poster! :P I think I caught everything you added, and I really can't find much that bugs me about it. A beautiful Nativity set was carefully set ...
Jan 2, 2008 -
Re: 5 Tips for Realistic Characters
5 Tips for More Realistic Characters* *Results may vary A lot of people have complimented me on my highly realistic characters recently, so I figured it was high time I ...
Jan 1, 2008 -
Re: Rosette
Ahoy there, haven't seen you around YWS before! My name is Saint, and I shall be your critiquer today. *bows* The first problem I see with this is formatting! The ...
Jan 1, 2008 -
Re: Ode to Dono
*gigglesnort* What does Dono sound like when he sings, anyway? Lol, this is brilliant, Mesh and Mesh's Mum! ^_^ -St. Razorblade The Official YWS Pirate :pirate3:
Jan 1, 2008 -
Re: Serenity
Ahoy there! Don't think I've seen you around YWS before. I'm Saint, and I shall be your critiquer today. :D Hmm... your introduction is both good and slightly bad. Did ...
Jan 1, 2008 -
Re: Post Your Pic Here (4)
New snapshot of Hamish! It was too cute to pass up. ;) Yes, he's in the washer. xD
Dec 31, 2007 -
Re: Struggling to come up with a title ( prologue)
Now, I am not a moderator and I have no authority, so consider this a friendly warning before the moderators do get on your case about this. I can see ...
Dec 31, 2007 -
Re: Roses are red, and so is Cherry Honey-Brown beer.
Ahoy! Welcome to YWS! My name is Saint. :) Augh, why did Nate ever put that preserve stuff on here? It's annoying. But that's just personal opinion, don't mind the ...
Dec 31, 2007 -
Re: Ridiculous sentence
Christopher Paolini isn't THAT bad. . . his books are just for people who have never had the experience of critiquing work ^^ Is that... the beginnings of a Paolini ...
Dec 31, 2007 -
Re: Ridiculous sentence
Tanith Lee? And there was me thinking we had a sneak peek at the next Paolini "novel". I know, so did I. And now I'm bummed because this won't serve ...
Dec 30, 2007 -
Re: Ridiculous sentence
What book is that from? *suppresses wave of nausea*
Dec 30, 2007