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Re: Ghost of the Prophecy
Hi there! Don't think I've seen you around YWS before. My name is Saint, and I shall be your critiquer today! Woohoo! *throws confetti* The girl would grow up into ...
Feb 24, 2008 -
Re: Death to Riches
Ahoy there! Don't think I've seen you around YWS before. My name is Saint and I shall be your critiquer today. :D Upon the city of Naethr, a chill floated ...
Feb 24, 2008 -
Re: Untitled [1]
Hello there! Welcome to YWS! My name is Saint and I shall be your critiquer today. :D There are three things that should be known about me: 1) My real ...
Feb 24, 2008 -
Re: The Life and Times of Miss Aurora Beaumont (and friends)
Can you do me a favour, darling? Put a blank line between each of your paragraphs. Your formatting right now is kinda painful on the eyes. X_X And remember, every ...
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Re: Amnesia
Hello there! I think I've seen you around YWS a couple times? In case I'm making things up in my head again, my name is Saint and I shall be ...
Feb 24, 2008 -
Re: Brothers, Friends, And Boy Friend
Ahoy there! Welcome to YWS! My name is Saint and I shall be your critiquer today. :D I yelled on the line with Kate, crying hysterically. It's kind of obvious ...
Feb 24, 2008 -
Re: Susan and Susan and Marcus
*blinks* Holy flying crackers... that was disturbing. Erm... it's well written and jam-packed with emotion, but a little hard to understand. Maybe that was your point? Hm. The style it's ...
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Re: A Wondrous Opportunity
As per your request, m'dear! :D and of course, bean sprout without having to jump up Not a big fan of "of course" being there, but that's just personal preference. ...
Feb 24, 2008 -
Re: tree, hose
Aw, how pretty! :D I think I like your accidental photos more than your purposeful ones, though. Lol. =P Anyway, the second one is more my favourite. I like how ...
Feb 24, 2008 -
Re: Contemplations
...Are you sure your body is entirely in one piece? *blinks* Haha, wow. That posture looks strangely impossible. I'm still trying to work it out in my head, but it's ...
Feb 24, 2008 -
Re: Swollen Grapes #1
As per your request, Jared! =D Have you ever listened to your heart thump against your chest at night, when no one is around to hear it? This is a ...
Feb 24, 2008 -
Re: Part 1: Shattered Love, Chapter 2
Yay! More! =D Mick was a fourteen, short brown hair and amazing eyes. Mick was a 14? So he was a giant number with eyes, arms, legs, and such? Haha. ...
Feb 24, 2008 -
Re: Journals of the Broken
As per your request, Reaky m'dear. ^_^ Haha, wow that was a quick read. I think I love you just for that. xD I've never been a huge fan of ...
Feb 24, 2008 -
Re: You're Beautiful
Hiya! I haven't seen you around YWS before. Welcome! I'm Saint and I shall be your critiquer today. Hmm, I don't think I've ever critted fanfiction on YWS before. Congratulations! ...
Feb 24, 2008 -
Re: 1. The Beginning (Fixed up a bit)
Ahoy there! Welcome to YWS! My name is Saint and I shall be your critiquer today. ;) Awesome username, by the way. Sweeney Todd = awesome flick. Alicia Bonnie sat ...
Feb 24, 2008
