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I like it. I think it's very symbolic, with the dandelion seeds and all. ;) You should work on it, like Via said, and PM Nate about it! He'll put ...

Hihihi! :D I'm Saint and I shall be your critiquer today! Feel special, woo! *throws confetti* ...I'm okay. Promise. “What were you thinking, putting those two together?! Eurgh, double punctuation ...

O_O Cold cold cold cold cold... I swear the temperature in my room just dropped ten degrees from looking at these. xD Numbers two, three, and six are my favourites. ...

:smt089 You evil human being! -:pirate3:

*standing ovation* It's amazing! Nobel Prize material right here! Rofl. I dig your notes. They're like, eight degrees of awesome. The sidenotes are hysterical. xD Yay maths gibberish that means ...

Author's note: Haha, sincere apologies for having taken so long. I've been writing Year Three, and I realised it sucks because I wrote it when I was sick and Eric ...

Ahoy there! Don't think I've seen you around YWS before. My name is Saint. To fix your formatting problem, all you have to do is hit "enter" twice at the ...

We made shirts for my dodgeball team! :D Here's mine. They're all the same except for the logo on the bottom -- that was personal choice. Mine's a skull and ...

Ooh, I really like that one. Although that streak above the sun is a bit weird? What exactly is that? To me, that streak is the only thing wrong with ...

Hello there! Welcome to YWS! Please remember to do two critiques before posting any of your own work -- the 2:1 critique-to-literary work ratio is a rule we have here. ...

Hey there! *waves* Can you do me a favour, love? Put a line between each of your paragraphs, to make it easier to read. I wouldn't be so up in ...

Hey Rei! *waves* Meep, journal-style story. Just a forewarning, they tend to bug me and my opinions tend to come out biased. Advance apologies. xD This week, I’m am doing ...

O_o Whoo... very interesting. Very nice. Clever, too. I like it. Although I think it would be better if you put binary code in the background instead of "File Not ...

Sorry it's taken me so long to get to this! I usually critique stories all at once, but something got lost in translation and I haven't read this yet. Apologies. ...

Hello there! *waves* I think I've seen you around YWS a couple times. She landed her eyes on Marty. "Her eyes landed on Marty" would get rid of the passive ...