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I'M ON TIME! Holy hand grenade of Antinoch! =O ...Heh. Robert and I were quoting Monty Python all Chemistry. And we almost talked Hubbard into letting us switch lunches! But ...

Er... I had to look that one up. xD Um... a realistic fiction about discovering the truth or... something. I might read the synopsis. Whisky on a Sunday

As you ordered, Sir Dono. =P Lol. You and your obsession with guns. The memory was all to clear in his mind–he wouldn’t be sleeping anytime soon. All too* clear. ...

You are such a showoff. *pouts* Anyway, this is a nice photo! It'd be better if you took it into Photoshop or something and played with the background -- it's ...

Ghostwriter, please please PLEASE do four critiques before posting any more of your work. It is a rule here, and while I am not a moderator, I do not want ...

Wow Adam! Well done! The hand looks a bit weird, but I love it! Especially the little CCF logo in the corner. Heh, nice touch. ;) I wish I had ...

Hi there! Haven't seen you around YWS before! My name is Saint and I shall be your critiquer today. :D Quick random note: Letters should be in italics to differentiate ...

Heya Wolf! As you requested, as I deliver. ^_^ If you want help with characterization, I wrote an article on it a while back in the Knowledge Base. Check it ...

Hey Gryphon! How's it hanging? :D It all started the day I realized that I was in love with my therapist. Eurgh. I hate opening lines like this. Unless it ...

Hey hey hey! *waves* =D “I don’t understand why he even keeps the boy here.” The guard said. Quick grammar note -- when there are speech tags like "(character) said," ...

Hey there! I don't think I've seen you around YWS before. My name is Saint and I shall be your critiquer today. :D Chase was working in the fields when ...

*dances* Yay more! This is a great story. :D out running the thoughts of her earlier awakening. "Outrunning" in this context is one word. *reads on* Oh, never mind. But ...

Heya! Have I seen you around the site before? If not, my name is Saint and I shall be your critiquer today! :D “So?” She said, calmly. The S in ...

Meep. Maybe you could crop these so that there's less white and more focus on the rabbits? xD [/sensitive eyes] They're very cute. I like the detail you put in ...

Hello there! Welcome to YWS! My name is Saint and I shall be your critiquer today. :D Here's a quick grammatical note for you -- when "Mum" is being used ...