Teague

Journalism experience is great -- it really teaches you how to work on a deadline. And it really helps your self-esteem. Definitely go for whatever experience you can get! If ...

Hey Bella! You'll have to let me know how things went today. :) A deep breath fills my nose with his scent, the scent of new fallen rain. Newly fallen ...

Hey Fish! First attempt at fantasy, eh? Go you for branching out! :D Standing quickly upwards, "Standing up quickly" might help with fluency here. *Random note* This is written in ...

I'm totally confused. I think I need to go mull all of this over for a while. xD -:pirate3:

Aye, I agree with Alainna. This would be much better as a haiku -- I can't really see it as a full length poem, but that might just be beacuse ...

Haha, I guess you do have to watch the show to totally get it. xD He does things like this from time to time. This one was inspired by him ...

I thought I commented this a long time ago? Hmm. Maybe I'm crazy. Which I am, but... you know what I mean. *ahem* I'm not a big fan of that ...

As per your request! ^_^ “ Perfect!",the word finally came. Get rid of the comma and put a space there. “Okay then” Needs a period. Blake unvolunatily took a step ...

Hey there! Have I seen you around before? Meh, can't remember. Bad memory. Anyway, I'm Saint and I shall be your critiquer today! :D *Random note* Doctors don't usually examine ...

Hello there! I don't think I've seen you around YWS before. My name is Saint and I shall be your critiquer today. :D *Random note* Your sentence fluency needs work ...

Yo yo yo, TN! How's it going? :D Kimmy slowly walked towards the mailbox praying to see a letter from her baby’s father, praying he was alive and well. The ...

Woot random works from last year getting a fresh bump. xD I want his shirt. That is pretty much one of the most amazing things I've ever seen. :P My ...

Hey, I think I've seen you around YWS a few times. How's it been? :D Ehh... I'm not entirely in love with your intro? Does it really relate to your ...

A delightful story, love! No major complaints from me, mostly grammatical stuff. ^_^ I'm glad you asked me to critique this! It was highly enjoyable. Plus, I love the title. ...

That is really pretty... although I think it'd be better if the focus was more on the face & the rose and less of the body was showing. And the ...