Teague

Author's note: Yeah, this is what happens when it takes you only 45 minutes of a 2.5 hour session to complete a state standardised test. Die AIMS, die. *cough* Anyway. ...

Hah, my mad poetry critiquing spree was just practise, so no guarantees that this will be entirely helpful. xD This has a nice meter to it. It's kind of singsong. ...

*squeezes* I love you! All of your poems have given me good practise with poetry and the home stretch of my critiquing goal! :D Anyway... *falls over* Hahahaha! Nice! I ...

*critiques rewrite... because rewrites are better* Wow... this is something I can really identify with. It sounds just like something my novel's main character would say. And I feel totally ...

I officially love you, Yoda. You're going to help me get my goal! I'm so close! =D Sorry, I'm just proud. xD Moving on... This is... interesting. I kind of ...

Woot! I only need four more crits to get 75. Thank you so much! *huggles* *gasp* Oh wow! I really like this one. So simple and yet so powerful. Elegantly ...

Woot! Round two, Yoda. Hah. Thanks again for giving me some practise. ^_^ Ooh, an interesting metaphor. I'm pretty sure I get what you're really trying to say? Lol, I ...

Hey Yoda! Thanks for letting me practise on your poems. It's a huge help. ^_^ Random question -- how do halls fall on deaf ears? *confused* Hm. An interesting little ...

...Stew? Hah, interesting. I personally think it kind of ruins the tone for the sake of rhyming. Not all poetry has to rhyme, dear. ;) The format is slightly annoying ...

Hehe! Aww, this one was cute. I think I might just have to diagram this so I get a better idea of what exactly happened, lol. But cute, fun little ...

Uhm... interesting? Lol. Some interesting comparisons you make here -- the yellow and pink and puppies and stuff. You hate puppies? Really? Lol. Interesting. I'm not sure they fit with ...

Thanks for letting me practise on your poem, Fire! ^_^ Not every line needs a comma at the end, deary. In fact in your... *counts* ninth line? The comma is ...

As per your request, love! ^_^ *tilts head* Interesting... Er. Yeah. Interesting. Definitely interesting. Short, sweet, and to the point, although I'm not sure what said point is? Lol. It's ...

Whoa... this piece is over a year old and yet no reviews. I should fix that! :D *Random note* Does the manager have a name? *reads* Oh, never mind. "Yeah, ...

Heylo there! Your faces and proportions are a bit weird -- then again, I'm not such a great artist myself, so I'm the pot calling the kettle black here. ^_^ ...