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Come get your fiction critiques here, folks! Post a link to the piece and I'll get to it as soon as I possibly can! Please, fiction or artwork/photography only. I ...

That is adorable. *melts* -:pirate3:

Glad to have taken part in history! *salutes* -:pirate3:

Why have I not commented on this? O_o Hehe! Dono's a Donosaur! A bald Donosaur, but a Donosaur nonetheless. Haha. My favourite bit has to be the skyscrapers going "Eek!" ...

Er... is there more to this? There isn't really enough to critique based off just this short blurb. =/ Honestly, there's no story here. We need a tangible story, a ...

*gigglesnorts* Chiko's totally ADHD like that. xD I worship your Chat-inspired drawings, Fire. They're wonderful. ^^ *licks* -Saint Razorblade The Official YWS Pirate :pirate3:

*chomps* So, where's the photo? And no, I don't have chocolate on my face. -Saint Razorblade The Official YWS Pirate :pirate3:

Ohmygod. Those crayons are the most amazing things I've ever seen! *steals crayons* Oh, and... yeah. The rest of the drawing is cool too. =X -Saint Razorblade The Official YWS ...

Haha, she's got a beard! xD But other than that, this is fabulous. The light is all swirly and sillhouette-y and pretty. And some other word that ends in a ...

*waves* Hello! Welcome to YWS. My name is Saint and I shall be your critiquer today. :D Memories began to swirl in his head triggered by the sounds of boats ...

I do, but more often than not I take it away by the end. Usually I just use it for inspiration. And more often than not it's a song lyric ...

Haha, yeah, those first two need to be cropped to have any real potential. The third one is yummy, but not particularly outstanding? Meh. I like what it says on ...

O_O Iwantyourteachertobemyteacher. *envy* Pulitzer Prize Winnah iz joo! -:pirate3:

*yawns* Yeah yeah, whatever. Crawl on my stinky feet all you like. =P Agatha kicked her legs, As opposed to kicking with her fingers? ;) The high heal struck him ...

Captain Planet scares me. -:pirate3: