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The Cavs got my support. Mostly because I'm holding a grudge against the Spurs for knocking off the Suns. *mutters dark things in the corner*

I'd like to say much more than what follows, but that'd be redundant. ;) So I'll say it anyway! Don't give up. Your spelling will improve over time (trust me, ...

PAT BUCHANAN! *bows*

I picked up on an inconsistency in the second one today. It's in the part where they're putting together a mismatched car. Angel starts talking about how to fix up ...

Has anyone else noticed that James Patterson can't write effectively as a girl? I spent the first book thinking Max was a guy. ;) Same here, until like page 170 ...

Lmfao... Futurama... gotta love it xD

Have fun, Nate! Come back to us in one piece! :D

I'm sorry to be so very harsh, but sometimes a few harsh words are good for the soul. There are so many grammar and spelling mistakes in this that I ...

Mickey Mouse strikes me as the pedophiliac type. -_-

This is a poem, darling. Belongs in the poetry secton. :) *waits for a mod to move it*

Hmm... personally, I feel this is kind of a cold read. The motions and actions seem rather forced as opposed to fluent and natural. Jackie shrugged. “I’m really excited. One ...

Chapter 1- Alex and Paris Alexandria Texan stood in front of the mirror and brushed her thick, jet- black hair. The 13 year-old wasn’t known to be, pretty or popular, ...

Please critique :(

It's 12:16 a.m. and I just spent three hours reading the third book without stopping. I freaking loved it. And I'm probably going to read it again tomorrow. Today. Whatever.

Yeah, I remember that. I was like, "didn't the cop person take the bear?" BUT based upon the excerpt from book 3 in the back of book 2 I suppose ...