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Re: Rain Storm
Ooh, nice description. I can't really say much because there isn't much, besides probably register a complaint that it's very short. Which isn't really much of a complaint, unless you're ...
Oct 6, 2007 -
Re: ok, so heres the deal
ASU! ASU! ASU! My brother's an engineering student at the main campus in Tempe, and I'll be an English major there in a few years. The main campus is really ...
Oct 6, 2007 -
Re: NaNoWriMo 2007
Eh... online? I dunno, try Googly. Maybe your local government website? And yes, I know it's Google, but I'm just silly. ;) But yeah... I think I've built up enough ...
Oct 6, 2007 -
Re: Sign Up For The YWS Newsletter!
I signed up! :D *is sick of seeing this thread on the Unanswered Posts list*
Oct 6, 2007 -
Re: Giant Wolves - prolouge
Hi there! I don't think I've seen you around YWS before. Welcome! I'm Razorblade. :) I can see some real potential here! You have a few fatal flaws, though; you ...
Oct 6, 2007 -
Re: NaNoWriMo 2007
I've got an outline, some research, and a few random bits. I want to have a cushion built up because I know I'm going to slack off around my birthday ...
Oct 6, 2007 -
Re: Piercing the Red
Well, I'm no poetry expert, so excuse if this isn't terribly helpful. :lol: I like all the stanzas except the last one- it doesn't quite click with the rest. You've ...
Oct 6, 2007 -
Re: Jerrsea'ya: Wind of Death
Holy cow, dear. This is waaaaaaaaaay too much. Divide it up into different threads; something this long is a HUGE deterrent to critiquers. And that's bad. I think you could ...
Oct 6, 2007 -
Re: Lion
He does look kind of stiff, especially around the hindquarters. His mane is probably his best feature. I like the colouring! Very... liony, for lack of a better word. Forgive ...
Oct 6, 2007 -
Re: Katherine
Hello again! How've you been? :D The council lay before me, garbed in robes of traditional white. The three sat upon their wooden thrones, stiff with resolve and age. Their ...
Oct 6, 2007 -
Re: A pic I drew during the summer, enjoy!
Ah! I see you just tried to post it straight from your computer. :D You have to either attach it or upload to Photobucket.com, and post the [img] link. Using ...
Oct 6, 2007 -
Re: Title Feedback
Strikes me as a novel about teenagers, for some reason. I'd look at the synopsis before I made my choice. The Nothing Remarkables
Oct 6, 2007 -
Re: Armored dude and halloween dude
I love the second one. Reminds me of Nightmare Before Christmas (
Oct 6, 2007 -
Re: Which authors/books do you hate?
I haven't posted here yet? Meh. Couldn't find any posts here by me. Books to Stab: -An American Childhood by Anne Dillard (SO utterly pointless and terrible) -House on Mango ...
Oct 6, 2007 -
Re: Rate The Custom Title Above You
I must know... who is Braylynn Alexa in relation to you? :P 10/10
Oct 6, 2007