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I thought it was a panda. xD

Hi there! I see you're new here. Welcome aboard YWS! I'm Razorblade. Here at YWS, we have this little rule that states you must critique at least two other works ...

Aww. The first one gives me warm fuzzies. ^_^ The second one reminds me of my own cat... which may or may not be a bad thing, depending on how ...

A Nazi apple? Interesting concept. Any real point? Lol. I have no artistic talent either. Don't worry about it. And that's also why this isn't exactly a helpful critique. I ...

Daaah! Banned for beating me to the punch and making me waste an extra 15 points. -_- Hehe. Thanks again for it. ^_^

Banned for pig-tasticness. And did I mention I love my avatar, Clau? ^_^

Banned for... the purpose of continuing this thread!

Hey there! This is much better than what you posted before. ;) Anyway, this has potential! The only problem is the fact that it feels rushed. You use a lot ...

Yeah, they do this often at another message board I post on. It gets really confusing really fast. Signatures are probably the best way to go about it. But still! ...

Yes, post it in sections. Glad you thought of that, since I forgot to mention it. xD And you're welcome, of course. -St. Razorblade The Official YWS Pirate :pirate3:

Hi there! Welcome aboard YWS! My name is Razorblade. A few things I'd like to bring up before I critique this: Rules. Here on YWS, it's a rule that you ...

Aye, I agree with Kitty on this one. It's a very eloquent piece, but it really should be expanded. Unless you want to just leave it as flash fiction, which ...

Congratulations, you guys! Way to go! :D :pirate3:

Haha! Sherlock Holmes Kitty! :D ...The hat and pipe getup made me think of that. xD Love it. But I'm not an art expert. -St. Razorblade The Official YWS Pirate ...

I think you should just post the enitre story, dear, since there's not enough to critique in its present state. A makeshift news story does not fiction make. -St. Razorblade ...