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Re: Practice your Signature!
How'd you do that, Snoink?
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Re: Title Feedback
It strikes me as fantasy, and my brain stops there. I'm not a huge fantasy fan and I wouldn't pick it up. Sorry. Ahoy Insanity
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Re: beauty
Hi there! I see you're new here. Welcome to YWS! My name is Razorblade. :D Hmm... I'm wondering, does this really belong in non-fiction? Doesn't strike me much as an ...
Oct 13, 2007 -
Re: Kyouzou
Interesting flash fiction! It's rather eloquent and pretty. I can see you have talent! By the way, hi! I don't think I've seen you around YWS before. I'm Razorblade. :D ...
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Re: Bloodly Mascara
Well, I don't pretend to be any kind of poetry expert, so pardon me if I don't know what I'm saying. xD Anyway, I felt the seeds of something good, ...
Oct 13, 2007 -
Re: The Cra-yon Lay-onds 4: The Lands of Crayolla
...Aet, I freaking love you. xD Your sense of humour is amazing. So random and rambling and yet full of underlying genius at the same time. I love the whole ...
Oct 13, 2007 -
Re: I Finished!
Congratulations! Way to be persistent. ;) Well, if you don't think I'm too young, I'd be happy to read over your novel- if not just because I'd like to read ...
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Re: Critique the Person Above You!
YWS Highwind Come on, it can't just be Adam and I going back and forth!
Oct 12, 2007 -
Re: YWS Highwind
Haha, that was cute. I'm assuming that TW Galaxy is Teenage Writers? And Staring is Staring_at_Ceiling, now known as Lindsaroo? Just curious. A few grammatical errors: “Staring , [s]A[/s]activate th
Oct 12, 2007 -
Re: At What Age Did You Begin Reading?
I started reading at three, and my first book wasn't really a book. It was a newspaper. My parents were a bit surprised, but for the most part I taught ...
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Re: Hormones, Homework, and Hot Lunches- Period 3
This is the third in a series of small writing exercises I did describing my high school experiences last year. I took one sheet of paper and filled out both ...
Oct 12, 2007 -
Re: Which authors/books do you hate?
Trainspotting by Irvine Welsh. Frequent use of the F word is disgusting and also it was written in the narrator's accent! I couldn't even understand most of it. Didn't that ...
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Re: Pig Icons!
Number 7 is awesome. xD Aww. They're all adorable.
Oct 12, 2007 -
Re: Critique the Person Above You!
The Last Prophet This is fun! :D
Oct 12, 2007 -
Re: The Last Prophet
...Wow, Snoink. Just... wow. Very simply put. That was incredible. I love the recurring one-liners. They have so much punch. There's a lot of beautifully portrayed emotion in this. Well ...
Oct 12, 2007
