Teague

I liked this. I couldn't find any mistakes, and the way you wrote it was good. When is more coming? Probably when NaNo's been underway for about a week.

Her hair... :shock: *supresses bad memories of my oh-so-irritating Chemistry teacher* Nothing on you! Just her hair reminds me of my Chem teacher. xD Her dress and necklace are really ...

Transport! Woo! Random question: When I earn a new star, do I just make the change in my profile or is there some kind of formality to go through?

The first and fifth photos were awesome. Really took my breath away. I love the second one but only because I love the sea. xD [/geek-ness] The wolf is really ...

The Order of Atlantis: A New Kingdom

This crit-the-person-above-you business is turning into a three-ring critique circle between you, me, and Kylan. xD Right. Let's begin. Lightning flashed across the blackened sky. Each flash casting s

Tee Hee, Samichan, these newbies are not Freshmen! We cannot beat them up. Instead we can only love and cuddle them and squeeze all the enthusiasm out of them that ...

I prefer simple names for my characters, and I really don't give a cracker for the meaning. A lot of times, especially with surnames, I try to keep it territorial. ...

Razorblade jumped up from her computer screen, having finished reading through the first page and a half that this storybook has actually been happening. "Avast!" she cried. "Where be my ...

Night Flight

Wow. The ending really delivered a blow that I felt physically in the pit of my stomach. Now that's craftsmanship. Overall, this is really good. There's not much I can ...

Wow! That's so cool how that guy called in. John whatever his name is. Nifty. I would've called but I was hosting my great-grandmother's 90th birthday party, so yeah. It ...

Hah, nice. A JB concert in Vegas sounds like a bad combination. xD Last concert I went to was at Cricket Pavillion and no one wants the lawn seats there. ...

Ah! The Grand Canyon. A few hours north of where I live. A hole in the ground, but a pretty hole in the ground. Not like Meteor Crater where they ...

Woo Partick Thistle! ...Oops, sorry. Wrong football. And they're not playing until the 20th. =P