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Flemkylezo! You know, in all the time I've known you I've never read anything you've written. So I thought, "I should fix that!" [/semi-ramble] Anyway... The sun rose over the ...

Aye, spacing here is a problem! Please try to space out your paragraphs like I'm doing here. Makes things easier on the eyes and, consequently, easier to critique. It's simply ...

Aye, this needs to be spaced out in order to be properly critiqued. It's a bit of an eyesore now. Send me a PM when you've spaced this out (preferably ...

Ahoy there! Haven't seen you around before; I can see you're new. Welcome aboard YWS! My name is Razorblade. :D Anyway, the biggest complaint I have right now is your ...

I like to climb up on the roof at night. Or, if my dad is home, I'll just go chill on the balcony. But I like to be high up ...

Haha. My best friend can't keep track of her left and right, so she wrote them on the toes of her Converse. I would make fun of her for it ...

Boredommm... and a dead camera. xD Woo reflections in the window! Shoes. The "left-right" thing is an inside joke. xD And then my camera battery died. I was going to ...

Finally! I'll be able to talk about what I've been wanting to talk about for two weeks! :D

7. Hyphenated words are bad. Avoid them whenever possible. Amen, brotha! I think I left out about sixty hyphens. Hey, it counted for sixty extra words. ;)

Just sent mine! Check your e-mail. :D -St. Razorblade The Official YWS Pirate :pirate1:

Ah! My inebriated mus musculus. Ahoy! Anyway, the biggest problem right now is that I can't read this! The spacing is painful on the eyes. See how I'm putting a ...

1. I have a sudden affinity for the phrase "wondered vaguely." 2. I had the lack of sanity to be competing against blue bar graphs. "You shall not best me, ...

Jack! I have that same shirt. Theif. ^_^ And zomgosh! Darchoco = Cody? :O *waves madly* Hey!

I'm kind of in love with Eric's cheeky charm and Sarah's sweet nature. xD We wiled away the evening watching old horror flicks Sarah’s dad, Ronald Montgomery, kept in a ...

Well, everyone's got things to say, no matter what age they are. And sure, some things might not be terribly helpful or accurate (heck, I once got a review that ...