Tazakk

Hello! I like the ideas in this so far. The plot is interesting, and it kept my attention the whole way through. The protagonists situation (homeless in New York) is ...

This was great! The wording was magnificent, and the poem flowed beautifully. Being busy, Nature is. This is the only part that seemed unfitting. It still worked, but seemed a ...

This is my first poetry review, so bear with me. The topic of this poem didn't really interest me, but that's not you fault. :mrgreen: There was an obvious topic, ...

Wow. Intense intro. I don't know if it's been mentioned, but Wouldn't magi be capitalized? Of course, this could be part of the plot and I'm completely wrong. The only ...

This story has a fantastic plot. I'm exited to see where it goes in the future. You did a good job of putting the reader into the situation without having ...