Tazakk

Zack, can disperse his own molecules; can enter and control inanimate objects I still don't know who shoved me, but before I could look I was picked up by Nick ...

Zack, can disperse his own molecules; can enter and control inanimate objects I watched a Nick, one of my newfound 'allies' at the circus, picked up another kid hiding in ...

PuffSammy, RedBird, and xX_white_shadow_Xx have requested I open this. Feel free to discuss ideas, thoughts, ect. on the storybook.

This is my first poetry review, so bear with me. The topic of this poem didn't really interest me, but that's not you fault. :mrgreen: There was an obvious topic, ...

Wow. Intense intro. I don't know if it's been mentioned, but Wouldn't magi be capitalized? Of course, this could be part of the plot and I'm completely wrong. The only ...

I have moved my post earlier here for clarity, as it takes place now. Zack, Can disperse his own particles;inhabit inanimate objects and control them From the crowd, I watched ...

This story has a fantastic plot. I'm exited to see where it goes in the future. You did a good job of putting the reader into the situation without having ...

Oops, sorry! I just realised those don't match up together at all. Do you want me to change my post, or can you change yours? Just consider mine as after ...

Profile: Name: Zack Age: 15 Power/Circus Act: Can disperse his own particles;inhabit inanimate objects and control them. Appearance: Short; shady face. Personality: Hungry for power, wants to gain lea