Tayler

Not rude, but of course makes sense to you. You are the writer, the one who developed this story. Therefore you know her. You know her past, her feelings, her ...

Okay, so just going to post this here. First, thank you much for the reviews. :D I will say, he is supposed to sound very mature for his age, which ...

Nice to meet you, Stella! :) Thank you for the criticism as well, definitely helpful. I need all the help I can get, as generally beginnings of stories of mine ...

Thank you from the criticism, that's extremely helpful! I know I did a terrible job of introducing the characters thus far, but I promise the second chapter will give you ...

Haha no worries, I'm about to head off myself. It is somewhat dauntingly long when posted like this, so I understand. I'll hold this space for a comment about your ...