Tayler

Note: I rewrote this, completely redoing the Prologue and tweaking chapter one using the criticism I received. I was going to go on to chapter two, then come back; but ...

This is extremely interesting, such a different piece and a neat look into predator vs prey. I enjoyed it, though I will say I have a few nitpicks and comments. ...

Hi! I just joined a few days ago as well, I think you'll like it here. I do! I really enjoy Medieval stories. I don't write them myself (yet, there ...

I have nothing to say that could be of help to you, as I really loved it. It was just the right amount of everything, and I really like that ...

Welcome! I'm rather new as well, and have the same problems of sitting down and actually writing a whole novel. Mine usually ends up in pieces on the computer, never ...

Nice to meet you, Stella! :) Thank you for the criticism as well, definitely helpful. I need all the help I can get, as generally beginnings of stories of mine ...

This is only my second review, so hopefully its actually helpful! I think this has great potential, the idea of her being able to see demons and whatnot. I think ...

Thank you from the criticism, that's extremely helpful! I know I did a terrible job of introducing the characters thus far, but I promise the second chapter will give you ...

Haha no worries, I'm about to head off myself. It is somewhat dauntingly long when posted like this, so I understand. I'll hold this space for a comment about your ...

Prologue Thunder clapped loudly in the distance, the first sign of the rain to come. A boy of eighteen, just turned man by law, stood in the field with his ...

Glad to hear I'm not the only one without a life haha. I should have the prologue up soon. I may not have time to finish chapter 1 actually. I ...

Hm, that's true I do! Its science fiction/romance type, but Across the Universe by Beth Revis was phenomenal. I wasn't sure when I got it, but I was immediately drawn ...

Ah I just finished the Infernal Devices yesterday. Started it yesterday too, haha. I was up until about 12:30 finishing it. ;) I've had it since it came out, but ...

I love Hush, Hush and Crescendo. Have you ever read the Mortal Instruments and Infernal Devices by Cassandra Clare? They aren't exactly angels, but involve angels as the "Shadowhunters" are ...

I like the idea, a lot. I particularly like Avalon's name. It makes me wonder if there is greater significance to it? I have to agree about the tenses switching. ...