TaylaChase

Hi everyone! Thank you all sooo much for reviewing my story! You helped me out a ton and my story is now (hopefully) better than when I started out with ...

Hi, I would suggest breaking this up into parts. It's quite long and lots of time people don't want to read something this long, or don't have the time. You'll ...

Hi Reida, I would suggest breaking this up into parts. It's quite long and some people don't like to read such long pieces, or don't have the time. You'll be ...

Hi, This was really good. I liked it! I like wolves quite a bit, and I'm writing a story about them, too. First of all, your beginning paragraph was good, ...

Hi Dakota, This was really good, it runs along smoothly and keeps the reader well captivated. I really enjoyed it! Wooden carts rattled noisily along the hard packed dirt road, ...

Hi, I would suggest maybe breaking this up a little and you might get more reviews. People don't always like to review long pieces or sometimes they don't have time. ...

This is quite interesting. It explains writers block well and isn't just a dry, boring essay as some are. I definitely have had WB before (although at the time I ...

Hi, This was very good. You keep the reader interested and describe the character well. You make it easy to feel somewhat what the character is feeling. ...and he mind ...

Hi, I really liked this piece! I'm writing a story about wolves, too, cause I really like them. Anyway, on to the review; ...the only thing he saw before the ...

Hi Dakota, I really like this piece of writing. It's intriguing and keeps the writer interested. me and rule alongside me my wonderful kingdom You may want to change this ...

I play the piano, too! Except I don't have grades, I'm in level 3B right now, though. ~Tayla

Hi This was good, but I did find some things that need to be changed. made a mental note of what to do if ever confronted with a similar gesture ...

Hi This was very good and intriguing. I did find a few nitpicks for you though. The wind howled loudly through the somber trees. Through the midnight fog Using 'through' ...

Hi, I don't really have the time right now to review such a long piece as yours, but I would suggest breaking this up into parts and you might get ...

Hi, This was really good! I liked a lot and was intrigued. I'm not a very good reviewer, but I'll do my best. Her breath was ragged, her paws were ...