TaylaChase

Evil

So, I know you're supposed to 'show' not 'tell' when you are writing, and I've been shown several examples, but I can never seem to get it right. My stories ...

Wow, I think I'll try to avoid doing any of that. . . I don't want to be hated T.T

Wow, this is really good. I don't have much to say that Rachel hasn't already covered, but I figured I'd give you my opinion. There were a few grammar errors, ...

Well, I really haven't done this in a while so I apologize if my review totally sucks. Anyway, I really liked your piece of work, although I do somewhat agree ...

...old cheese, so instead she...

I like names with fire in it. I'd have to say 9/10.

Hmm...8/10

Banned for joining YWS on a Thursday.

Hi, This is great! I really think you should continue on this story. I nodded, I knew that I always needed to cherish the time I had with him. I ...

UFOs

You get a green smiley face :mrgreen: *inserts coin*

Hopes

Not to my knowledge. How many animals do you own?

destroyed the world using...