TaylaChase

Sorry about the short and unfinished review, I kinda ran out of time, sorry.

First of all, your beginning sentence could use some work. It doesn't really intrigue the reader and make them want to read more. Your beginning sentence should capture the readers ...

Hi, this is pretty interesting, you have a unusual type of writing style. I'm not really familiar with reviewing pieces written like this, but I'll do my best. I like ...

Well, I'm not really good at reviewing poetry, but I'm trying to get better. Anyway, I really liked your piece, it flowed nicely, and nothing seemed to be too forced ...

Wow, I just wanted to say this was amazing (As was your last piece, Pretty Little Lucifer)! I really, really like your writing style, and I just want to say ...

Well, I really don't know much at all about poetry, but I thought this was awesome!! I really liked the lines, This mask I hide behind, has started breaking. Anyway, ...

First off, I want to say I thought your story was awesome :D I really don't have much else to say, but there were a few things I want to ...

Hey Dakota :) Sorry, you were probably hoping for a good review, but I just wanted to say I think your story is awesome :D There's not much I can ...

Hey, I was looking for some reviews so I was hoping you could review my Fantasy Fiction, titled Wings. Here's the link You don't have to read it if it's ...

Overall this is pretty good, but there were a few things I wanted to mention. Sithe crouched next to Verlinae, waves of musket fire and spells flew by them. I ...

Hi, I posted a new piece, and I was hoping you could review it for me, cause I really like your reviews :) Anyway, I hope it's not too long ...

Wow, great poem ^^ I really liked it! I don't know much about poems, so I can't really give you a review (Sorry) but I just wanted to say I ...

This is just something I came up with today cause I felt like writing, so... I wrote. So I'm sorry if it's terrible to read. I was also trying to ...

I really don't know much about poetry, but I liked it, I think you did a pretty good job conveying emotions through your writing. Again, I don't know much about ...

Wow, this is really good. I don't really have much to say that could help, but I just wanted to say I liked it. I'm not really into vampires, but ...