TaylaChase

Well, first off, I like the simplicity of this poem. It's short and simple, yet still has so much meaning in it. Black paints the most colorful sunsets, Speaks the ...

Hey Zanna! This piece was. . . interesting, to say the least. It was well written, although I do have a few issues with some parts. So, let's get to ...

Wow, I love the imagery and emotions coming from this poem. The flow of the poem is very smooth and not forced at all. Some love the sea when the ...

I like the way you summed up the theme of this poem and the emotions into a shorter, but still very clear message. Sitting sadly upon my bed [I know ...

Okay, so first off, I don't really know much about poetry, so I could be completely wrong, but here's my opinion. Torn and ragged battle flags fluttering in the wind, ...

Hey Kat! Another great piece of poetry! This piece sounded a little choppy to me, might have been cause of all the commas, but it didn't seem to flow as ...

Wow. Let me just say wow. I really liked this piece, it has so much emotion to it, it just explodes with emotion. I love it! I just don't have ...

So, here I am again, and there you are again, with another awesome poem! They just keep getting better and better! How do you come up with such awesome poems?! ...

Hey Kat! Yet again, another amazing piece! My reviews are all probably starting to sound the same to you now. Welp, sorry about that, but here I go again. Again, ...

Okay, so I really liked this piece, as I like mostly all of your pieces. Anyway, my reviews on poems suck, but I'll give it a try. I really liked ...

Wow, I really like this. It's very interesting the way that it was written, but you can really get into the story and feel what the characters are feeling. There ...

Okay, first off, this would be a lot easier to read if you divided it into more paragraphs. Try dividing the big blocks of writing into smaller ones to make ...

Oh, and another thing, I really liked the line 'this beautiful rain will never die' and 'why can't tears be beautiful?' (Sorry, can't use the right quoting cause I'm on ...

Hey Kat, I don't have much time right now so I'll just give a quick (lame) review. First of all I really liked it. It was a little confusing (what ...

So, overall I think this was decent, but you should try to portray more emotion. I like the 'theme' of it, but it could still use some work. Also, some ...