TaylaChase

I really can't find anything that needs critiquing about your piece, I just wanted to say that I enjoyed it. A lot of what you say here is very true. ...

This was some good stuff here. Anyway, I have a few nitpicks to bother you with. I remember that day I stopped believing in you. The waves rose high above ...

Wow, I really like this. I have no idea how to critique lyrics to a song, and I don't really know it's that's what you're looking for anyway, but I ...

This was nicely written, good job :D I'm not really sure how to critique works like this that aren't really 'stories', but I can give you my opinion. These are ...

This is interesting. It is kind of short, though, so there's not really a lot for me to critique. Anyway, I like the way you list off things that you ...

Wow, this is really good. I really enjoyed this poem, and seeing as I have a horse as well, I obviously enjoyed your topic. I really love horses and I ...

Well, first off, I just want to say that I liked this piece, and also would be interested in reading more if you wrote more. Anyway, I do have a ...

A/N: So, I've never really written poetry (and after reading this you'll see why) so, I know this probably sucks. Anyway, I wrote this poem for school a while back. ...

Well, I know this has been up there for a while now, but i was just going through some of your writing and I noticed a few things about this ...

A/N: So, this is a contest entry hopefully, for the contest, The Beginning of the End, so it's supposed to be 250 words, with the same beginning and ending word. ...

The birds’ morning song woke him, but his eyes remained closed. As your opening sentence this should be more intriguing, it should pull the reader in and make them want ...

Wow, I really like this! :D I think you did a great job on it! Yesterday there was no happiness Yesterday there was no glee Yesterday I was just a ...

Wow, this was really good. I really liked the emotion and the message you so clearly conveyed through you poetry :D Throughout the years of strife and war, Old Glory ...

Wow, I thought this was really good. It has a lot of emotion in it and the message comes across very clearly. I loved it! :D I'm not the one ...

This was very interesting. I liked it. It seems like you have a lot of emotion behind this, but it doesn't really come through on the paper very well. A ...