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Re: No one knew
First I'm gonna say good work, and now I'm just going to get right on in to the review. XD Petals falling hopelessly, Crying, Wringing dew tears from the stem. ...
Oct 4, 2011 -
Re: Rather lie here and cry.
I like the imagery and emotions packed into this short little poem. The rhythm was just a tad choppy, so that's something you could work on, but nothing too bad. ...
Oct 4, 2011 -
Re: Rhythm
Honestly, this was a little confusing to me. It may just be my simple brain, but I didn't really get what it was supposed to be about. What point was ...
Oct 4, 2011 -
Re: Showers of Fear
I like the rhythm you created in this piece, it goes nicely with the poem. Anyway, I personally enjoy rainstorms, so I might be a little biased, lol XD Hot ...
Oct 4, 2011 -
Re: Dear You
I thought this was interesting, but I really liked it :D I'm not really sure how to critique it, though, but I think it's an interesting concept. XD I wish ...
Oct 4, 2011 -
Re: You Know You Want Some [re-opened]
Hi :D Do you think you could review my poem for me? It's kinda suckish, so I understand if you don't want to. XD It's dramatic poetry. Here's the link; ...
Oct 3, 2011 -
Re: Kafka's intellectually stimulating reviews
Hi, do you think you could consider review a piece for a contest? It would be really appreciated! Here's the link; I understand if you don't want to though XD ...
Oct 3, 2011 -
Re: Déjà vu
I really liked this! I'd say I would definitely like this if it were a song, but it really depends a lot on the music that goes with it. Anyway, ...
Oct 3, 2011 -
Re: Cat Girl, Tam
Wow, this is awesome! I don't really have anything helpful to say, I just wanted to say it's awesome :D I think you did a great job with the shadows, ...
Oct 3, 2011 -
Re: I am the Unknown Soldier
Wow, I really liked this. It was a very powerful piece and you could see the emotion there clearly. I thought this was great. :D I like the way you ...
Oct 3, 2011 -
Re: Little Popeet: The Lost Child
I thought this was well done, good job! And the poor coloured man seemed very discontent, And his grief overcame him at this moment; And he wrung his hands in ...
Oct 3, 2011 -
Re: The Truth
Wow, I really liked this :D I always wanted to write lyrics, but I could never get it right, so I admire you for being able to come up with ...
Oct 3, 2011 -
Re: a frozen window pane
Hi, well, this was really good! I do have a few nitpicks to make, though. First off, it was sort of choppy in a few places. I also didn't really ...
Oct 3, 2011 -
Re: It's so easy
It’s so easy, you’re alone Close your eyes and world is gone Not to love and not be loved And to cry in silence [First off, I don't think this ...
Oct 2, 2011 -
Re: Calling For Mum
Well, for starters, this is really good. I liked it a lot, although it was a little confusing to me. I didn't really get what was going on in some ...
Oct 2, 2011
