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Re: Walls
I'm sick of these four walls That I have to see every single day Closing in on me It's getting harder to breathe in this room The walls are white ...
Oct 4, 2011 -
Re: A Trip To Torture
Thanks so much for commenting on this and helping me fix it; this was my rough draft of it and I just sorta wrote it down as it came to ...
Jun 14, 2011 -
Re: A Trip To Torture
I wrote this poem a few minutes ago because I have to go to the dentist today and I was nervous about it, as dumb as that sounds. I'm getting ...
Jun 14, 2011 -
Re: Black Angel
Thank you. :) I'll try and write some more. :D Is there anything in it that just stands out or seems wrong... or anything that needs to be changed?
Jun 9, 2011 -
Re: Black Angel
Thanks you guys. :) Actually what you guys said about the meaning was right. But anyway, thank you for the help on it. And the word of wisdom too. :D
Jun 9, 2011 -
Re: Black Angel
I wrote this poem sometime early Memorial Weekend. I'm sorry it's so... Dark. I've been going through some stuff recently and I'm just kinda in this dark period. Writing it ...
Jun 7, 2011
