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Say I don't know what I'm talking about. Can you guess what I meant?

Thanks. And that was the purpose: keeping it vague.

I like the fact that you say 'Dhanyabad'. Mother tongue is always special.

Thanks.

What if I changed the ending, and made it less dark?

Thanks so much for the review. Glad you enjoyed it. I was thinking about the point you mentioned, the twist coming out of nowhere. Is it too abrupt, you think?

Thanks a lot. To be honest, I didn%u2019t see that coming. I think siblings can have that sort of conversation. You know, if you're not as confident as your brother, ...

Thanks for the review. Nothing gives a writer more satisfaction than a reader being able to able to relate to the story. Really, your words meant a lot.

It's alright.

It's alright.

@XxDarkRosesxX, you probably wanted to comment here. Did something go wrong?

Thanks for the review. Gosh, how did I miss that typo?

Thanks for the review. And no, not most of my works are on the 'harder side to convey'. Haha!

Yeah. That's because I'm from a completely different cultural background.