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Re: Do You Remember?
Hi Fabiha, you've done a lot of favours to me. Now it's my turn. First of all, it was a pretty good story indeed. You have a great skill of ...
Apr 21, 2019 -
Re: Amelia, or the female Jesus
I liked the story, especially the ending. You see I'm not a big fan of fantasy (as I can't write fantasy myself), but this piece fascinated me mostly because of ...
Apr 19, 2019 -
Re: Immigrants
Amazing! I didn't see the end coming, and it came with a huge surprise. Let me go para by para. You described the MC's love for her house brilliantly. I ...
Apr 18, 2019 -
Re: Mad Never Crazy - Short story
I liked the beginning of the story. You pictured the whole thing of being lost in a resonant way. Here go some comments: I searched the internet for the phrase ...
Apr 17, 2019 -
Re: Fairy Diary | Day 13 1/2
I actually didn't understand whether it was a part of a book or not. That was why I couldn't really make out some of the things, like why the speeches ...
Apr 16, 2019 -
Re: Dead.
Liberty500, though I'm not a big fan of fantasies, you made me really like this one's concept. Well done! Just a few comments from my side: "It's weird being dead." ...
Apr 16, 2019 -
Re: At The End
Wow! What a story! To be honest, I feel really really jealous. As I went on reading, the thoughts of your character made me think, and picture different things in ...
Apr 15, 2019 -
Re: I am not a monster (pt. 1/2)
TheMulticoloredCyr, I liked your story. You seem to have a great knack of creating suspense. I'm obviously no expert, but I'll try my best to put my best constructive opinions. ...
Mar 24, 2019