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Re: Because - Chap. 4
Have I mentioned how much I love this story? Cause I do! :D I love how you keep switching between the past and the present, because this really works for ...
Jan 1, 2009 -
Re: Runaway~ The Journey of Thieves (the beginning)
This does have potential, I really do love thieves, and runaway thieves are even better. And, your summary makes the plot seem interesting, as I also like witches. :D But, ...
Jan 1, 2009 -
Re: NVM 8
This is an interesting beginning and it has great potential. I like the whole book worm character, and I'm interested in what happens later on to create the preference. And ...
Jan 1, 2009 -
Re: Because - Chap. 3 (Edited)
I really should hurry up and get to the newer chapters, because all I really have to say about this chapter was that it is awesome. I've seen parts of ...
Dec 31, 2008 -
Re: The Music of Dusk
I really liked this poem, dusk is my favorite part of the day as the light slowly disappears and the night comes. :D And, I love how this was a ...
Dec 31, 2008 -
Re: Silly, but Never Childish
Saw this in the featured story part of the site, and I decided to click on it. I like this note, how it's both about yourself and about the world, ...
Dec 31, 2008 -
Re: These Four Walls
I love this poem, it's so passionate and so compelling. It just sucks you in and then your the one dying for love. It just comes across perfectly. For just ...
Dec 30, 2008 -
Re: I Believe In God
I loved the boldness of this post and this poem. The title of it as it showed up in the Featured stories link at the side of the add made ...
Dec 30, 2008 -
Re: To Love An Infidel
This is an interesting poem. I liked the story of the freedom through love, as it holds a great imagery. Your poem truly has a story to tell. Unfortunately, I ...
Dec 30, 2008 -
Re: Tedious to Bear: the daily struggles of a teenage Touretter
I like this poem, how it tells of living with Tourette's through the imagery within the poem. It's a great way of showing something like this without preaching about it. ...
Dec 24, 2008 -
Re: I'll Fly Away
It's an interesting poem, with a lot of imagery. It almost tells the story of the hardships faced by the person within the poem, showing the readers a little more ...
Dec 24, 2008 -
Re: Chapter 1 - Harry Who?
An interesting start of a fic, although it really doesn't give anyone who knows Harry Potter much new to go on, which is what I think some of the others ...
Dec 23, 2008 -
Re: Colors of love (New and Improved -hopefully-!)
This is a beautiful poem, each line bringing forth amazing imagery. I love how the blend of images and emotions equal into the love that she feels for her guy. ...
Dec 23, 2008 -
Re: Shooting Stars
I really like this poem, it has beautiful imagery. I like your comparisons for the night sky, describing them as well as describing the night sky. The night sky is ...
Dec 23, 2008 -
Re: Little Miss Yellow Eyes
Very interesting, I liked how you started off with the teen waiting at the subway station instead of just heading into action. Allows us to see the main character in ...
Dec 22, 2008
