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TashHill

  • Short Story » Other, Fantasy Re: Uhuru (Freedom.)

    Haha, I had to read that twice to try and respond (in a good way!) I%u2019ll have to check out this Author I have never heard of him! You are ...

    May 11, 2014
  • Short Story » Other, Fantasy Re: Uhuru (Freedom.)

    Thank you for the review, I personally prefer using a wider range of grammar tools and find that continuous usage of commas can become boring and make text drag. The ...

    May 8, 2014
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Midas Man

    Sorry, computer malfunction, lol.

    May 7, 2014
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Midas Man

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    The use of the word ‘line’ twice in a single sentence takes away from the general readability of the piece and can also seem as if the writer does not ...

    May 7, 2014
  • Short Story » Romantic, Narrative Re: Of Dante and Silken Fire

    Thank you very much, well it was not hard to get the emotions through %u2013 it%u2019s a personal experience after all. Your comments will help me make this better for ...

    May 6, 2014


I am big enough to admit I am often inspired by myself.
— Leslie Knope