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Re: The Sapphire Princess Chapter 1
A tear escapes my lids and rolls down my flushed pink cheek resting when it hits my thin lips. I can taste the salt on my tongue. I take a ...
Aug 11, 2011 -
Re: Vampires (2)
Hey There! I love the genre I have to say! No matter what people say about it being over rated it's what you love to write! I write about vampires ...
Aug 11, 2011 -
Re: The Princess and the Stones, Chapter 1
Hey there! I thought you did a great job! You are very good with words! Very well written! SOme suggestions I have are not to rush through exciting parts for ...
Aug 11, 2011 -
Re: Weird Dreams?
I thought it was great! Good spelling and grammar. There isn't much of a catch though!
Jun 29, 2011 -
Re: Intelligence
I agree. Concrete rhyme schemes take away the greatness of the poem! I though it was great! Good work!
Jun 29, 2011 -
Re: My Bloody Rose
It is at this link! I am just starting chapter three! =) SUMMARY! A story that begins in the 18th century then zooms ahead to modern times. Rose meets a ...
Jun 29, 2011