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Re: Night Before Summer
My first try making a poem without rhyme, I'm not sure if I like it. I would really appreciate it if someone took the time to review this, because I'm ...
May 17, 2011 -
Re: A Birthday Poem For Friend's Birthday
Hi I'm taria and I'm going to review your poem, hope you don't mind ^^ First of all let me say that your friend is lucky to have you, and ...
May 17, 2011 -
Re: Romeo & Juliet: Instant Messaging Edition
I loved it! I honestly just finished reading romeo and juliet so it's funny to see this up here x) I agree with ErBear, It would be awesome to see ...
May 16, 2011 -
Re: Truth
Stranger will you help me? I can’t quite recall who I am. In the mirror I see, damage of my scam. Behind a white smile the tongue is black. In ...
May 16, 2011 -
Re: the journey
Hi, I'm Taria and I'm going to review your poem to the best of my abilities ^^ Lava pointed out that you might be from india, I'm from iceland so ...
May 16, 2011 -
Re: Fresh meat!
Hi and welcome, I'm also quite 'fresh' I have been looking at some sites and i finally decided on this one. everyone is really nice - with out giving 'ooomgz ...
May 16, 2011 -
Re: An Inopportune Visit From Inspiration
I just had to tell you, that made my day^^ Describes my weekend perfectly!
May 15, 2011 -
Re: Make Me Whole
I think i wrote this when i was 16, that was three years ago, man I'm getting old He left me such a wrack Lost and alone I had fallen ...
May 15, 2011 -
Re: hate you fate
hi. this is my first review (: I have to say this poem left me kind of confused. I wasn't sure what you were trying to say some of the ...
May 15, 2011 -
Re: Konnichiwa=Hello in Japanese !! I am a new member
HI ^^! I'm also into japanese culture and everything related to japan to be honest! Anime, manga, JDrama you name it. I'm currently hosting a Japanese exchange student. it has ...
May 13, 2011 -
Re: Welcome New Members! [2]
Hi everybody ^^ I have been writing for about a year now, but I was always too afraid to put any of it online for people to see. I'm from ...
May 13, 2011 -
Re: Scarred Senses
I wrote this after watching the news some time ago. The justice system just makes very angry sometimes, and when I'm angry i write so this is the result Bottomless ...
May 13, 2011 -
Re: Broken Soldier
First thing i put up here^^ I had to write this for a class and we drew random rules about structure, rhymes and syllables. English is not my first language ...
May 13, 2011
