Tarakona

I know it's been a while since you've reviewed my work, but here are the changes I've made thanks to your review: A flick of my tail! A snap of ...

Oh my god, how did I not notice I wrote 'live' instead of 'be'. Thanks for pointing that out. I sorta wrote this on my iPod before transferring it to ...

Just letting you know, forgo means "do without", "refrain from" or "neglect". So forgo was the right word to use, in my opinion.

Hi MrMuddyPig, The reason it is "forgo" and not "forget" is so it rhymes, and also why it is "a while". And, yeah, a comma will be better after "there". ...

I would like suggestions for a better title if anyone can come up with one. The title it has now was meant to be temporary until I (or someone else) ...

I shall have to review the next chapter at a later time, as I am rather busy at this moment in time. I should be able to review later today, ...