TanazMasaba

hey this is apretty good story. Why don't I kind of list all the positives and the negatives? Good: 1) Brilliant concept, really unique, really creative 2) No distracting or ...

Chapter Three: “Tip tap, dreams are raining”. I was lying on my stomach, feet dangling in the air on the sleek white couch eating popcorn and watching a retarded movie ...

*blushing* thank you so much for the advice (and the compliments) pls come back now and then to read this. I don't think I can continue if I don't have ...

The 5 minutes bell rang. I crossed my fingers and opened the bathroom door, just a few inches. The halls were filling up with people. I closed the door and ...

Here's my story: A group of talented teens arrives at this summer camp. They meet and becomes one group and the drama begins. Okay that's stupid. I just don't know ...

Any one mind if I join (what a stupid question!!) Anyways I'm taking hope. Profile coming up soon :D

God I'm so glad this chapter is not that lengthy like so many people's are, but don't you think it's getting a little rushed? Slow down there and express more ...

God I'm so glad this chapter is not that lengthy like so many people's are, but don't you think it's getting a little rushed? Slow down there and express more ...

oh and if you got time please see my work "Speak Now". I need good writers to help me correct my mistakes. Criticisms not accepted---criticisms WANTED!!!

"My hands shook as I put the key in the lock. When I twisted I heard a very soft click." I don't think it goes with the flow. "Maybe he ...

Thanks so musch for your help and please do come by now and then!

hey this is actually kind of cool you know, except for the last bit I guess, that was confusing. I think you should have given a little more attention for ...

I am an outcast. I do all the dirty work and watch others enjoy the time of their lives. Fridays are okay, I thought, what with every one being busy ...

oh and if you need any help just PM me

I love the entire poem. It's beautiful, emotional and you were able to express your self very creatively. However, don't you think the poem becomes a little too repetitive some ...