Tally

This is very well written and impressively well researched. Just to reiterate Kaiden, whilst the background information on each character was very interesting, all at once was perhaps a little ...

Hello, I read this a couple of days ago but didn't have time to review so I made a mental note to come back and ta-dah here I am! First ...

This is just the sort of story I enjoy :) I couldn't spot anything technically inaccurate. I love the impact of the opening line and the voice of the main ...

Wow, I thoroughly enjoyed reading this - such beautiful writing! I'm struggling to believe you're only 15 - your writing style is so assured and mature. I can't spot any ...

Wow I love the intrigue you create around Danielle, leaving us wondering what has happened for her to be so repulsed by the idea of human emotion and the memories ...

This is interesting, I would like to know more about his parents; like what would make them have no love whatsoever for their child... I'm hoping they're not just pure ...

This was an enthralling read! I could feel Meredith's pain, both emotional and physical. I liked the part where she was reflecting on her life and how she wanted more. ...

I liked this because I could relate to it! All I can really think to say is to perhaps think about adding some description so we can imagine the characters ...

I loved the honesty of this piece, because often when people don't really understand something they over dramatise it and it lacks meaning, but in this case you've done a ...

I'm not really a poet myself but I love the way you've captured the feeling that you just have to write, like there's something you have to say, a story ...

I found this piece completely absorbing! Even when I didn't want to read on (I'm squeamish!) I couldn't seem to stop. Abram is wonderfully chilling in his disregard for the ...